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A Student's Submission:
1. The Topic
Write a few sentences about your English studies. For example, why are you interested in studying English? How long have you been studying English? Do you prefer to study English by yourself or with a friend?
2. The Student's entry
I like to communicate with people in English. I've been studying English for five years. However this is not included school days. I calculaterd from when I studied it harder.I prefer to study English with my friends.
3. Teacher's Comments: (Click here, to add a comment.)
I would like to prectice my english with other people around the world.
Submitted by: Edgar Valero 2006-04-14 20:32:56
A good effort, keep up your hard work. The last two sentences need a little work. They would be clearer if worded such as “This does not include the years I spend studying English during my school days. Rather, I calculate the number of years I have studied English from the time I started to study English more seriously.
Submitted by: Bob Hendly 2006-05-14 17:57:24